Twilight
Posted: November 2003
Title: Twilight
Author: Ida
Type: FCS
Characters: Elladan/Elrohir
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The characters and locations belong to Tolkien. This is pure fiction
and I've made no profit from this.
Warning: Slash, twincest!
Timeline: A couple of centuries before LOTR
Author's Notes: Since English is not my native language I appreciate any serious criticism
you may want to provide…
Summary: Elladan can't sleep…
*****
He couldn't sleep. He was twisting and turning in his bed, but
couldn't seem to find a comfortable position to lie in. As he fell over on
his back with an exaggerated sigh, he glanced out the window. Ithil was bright
tonight and was mercilessly spreading her rays into Elladan's chamber. It
didn't seem likely that he would find any rest soon. At least not in here.
That thought brought an idea to Elladan's head that warmed him
a little. When he and Elrohir had been mere elflings, they had practically
shared everything. Interests, secrets and a special connection that only twins
possess. And they had often shared the same bed. Well, not in other than a
brotherly manner, but as they started to grow older and passed their coming
of age, the bed sharing had ebbed out. They had grown apart a little at some
point and they no longer shared like they had done before, but the connection
had
never faltered.
As Elladan now lay sleepless in his bed and starred up in the ceiling, he decided that he would surely get some nice, peaceful rest if he crept into Elrohir's bed with him. Like they had done so many nights as elflings.
Sliding out of bed, he put on a light blue robe and carefully opened the door to his chambers. He poked out his head and peered down the hallway to see if the coast was clear. Moving as quiet as only the Eldar can, he quickly closed the door behind him and started walking soundlessly towards the other end of the hall where his brother's chambers were.
When he finally reached the door, without running in to any
other elf on a night stroll, he put his ear to the door and listened. It was
all quiet inside so he carefully turned the handle and peered into the darkness
inside Elrohir's chambers. His room wasn't quite as lit up by Ithil as Elladan's,
but he could easily make out every furniture in front of him. To the left
stood the bed and in it lay Elrohir. Alone. Elladan let out a mental sigh.
He hadn't been sure if he would walk in on his brother with a lover in bed,
and he was
strangely glad that that wasn't the case, at least not tonight.
He stepped in and closed the door behind him. He turned towards the bed and started walking. Elrohir was lying on his stomach with his head turned from the door and one arm swung over the edge of the large bed. As Elladan reached the bed he carefully started creeping up the bed towards Elrohir. He put a hand on his brother's shoulder and gave it a slight shake.
"Elrohir." he whispered. "Elrohir."
His brother started stirring, lifted his head and snapped it around to see who was waking him in the middle of the night.
"Elladan? What are you doing here? Is something the matter?" A slightly worried tone crept into his voice as he turned and sat in his bed facing Elladan with the thin covers lying about his hips. Elladan was presented with a beautifully shaped chest and long, brown hair that cascaded down strong shoulders.
"No, `tis nothing important, really…" he answered a little shyly as he realized that neither he nor Elrohir were elflings anymore and way past their maturity to be doing this. "It's actually a little silly…I… I'm sorry, I didn't mean to wake you…" He started to back out of the bed when Elrohir reached out and took his hand. He smiled and said
"I'm sure it's nothing silly. Not when it comes to you." He gave Elladan's hand a slight squeeze. "Now, tell me what the Valar was so necessary to wake me up about in the first place!" he teased. Elladan looked up from where his hand was connected to Elrohir's and then met the demanding gaze of his brother's eyes. Such beautiful eyes. As blue as the sky on a clear spring day.
"Well, I…I couldn't sleep!" He looked down at the sheets his free hand had started nervously pulling and twisting. Why the Valar was he nervous?! "And I thought that maybe if I could sleep here next to you like we did when we were younger, well…I could get some rest!"
Elladan now dared a glance up to meet his brother's eyes. They looked a little surprised. Elladan got insecure. "You know how it is! You always sleep better in another's bed!" he defended himself. His brother started to giggle.
"You do, don't you?" Elrohir gave him a wink. "It's alright, Elladan, I know what you mean! I would love to have you here in my bed as you used to. It's actually quite sad that we don't do that anymore… I've missed you." Elladan returned the small smile that grazes Elrohir's lips. Elrohir patted the spare space on his bed. "Now, take that robe of and lie down here next to your favourite brother in whole Arda!" Elrohir lay back on the pillows and when Elladan had disrobed himself he lay down next to him and pulled up the covers to his chest. He let out a sight and a `thank you' and snuggled closer so that his head rested by Elrohir's shoulder. It was a comfortable position and soon, both had drifted off to sleep.
It was still night when Elladan woke up. At first he didn't know where he
was, but as he turned his head, his eyes landed on the sleeping image of his
brother lying next to him. He smiled a little at the stunning creature that
was Elrohir and turned to lie on his left side. Elrohir had almost kicked
away the cover and it barely hid his private parts. Elladan rested his eyes
on a beautiful, pointed ear and couldn't help himself as he reached out and
traced the curved shell with his fingertips. As he reached the pointed tip,
a very small sigh, barely loud enough to register, escaped from Elrohir's
lips. Elladan stopped abruptly, but didn't remove his fingers. He carefully
leaned up on his elbow to check if his brother was awake.
Elrohir's eyes were open, but distant, as the Eldar were in their sleep, or deep rest, if you will. His mouth was slightly opened and his breath came out in a peaceful rhythm. Elladan rested his head in his hand and had a perfect view of a perfect body. As his fingers continued to caress Elrohir's ear he felt a sudden urge to touch this body everywhere. He felt a need to feel the soft skin under his hands wherever they could reach. Elladan's gaze drifted down the resting body of his twin brother and although he knew that he himself looked almost identical, he couldn't help to feel that he needed to be close to Elrohir. As close as they could be, body against body, mouth against mouth, erection against erection… He blinked, a little startled by his own thoughts and the feelings they were making him feel. His heart was pounding when his eyes ones again settled on the luscious mouth before him. He moved his fingers carefully upwards over a smooth cheek and slowly traced out the outer lines of Elrohir's full, rep lips. As his fingertip followed the curved upper lip, he could feel the warm breath escaping his brother's lungs and he leaned over to inhale deeply. It was sweet and it filled him with joy and love and…something else…arousal. He closed his eyes and drew a final deep breath before he leaned back into his earlier position.
Elladan's fingers left Elrohir's lips and started drawing a
trail down his chin, neck and making slow, feathery light circles on his chest.
He graced around one nipple, then the other, until they were hard with arousal.
As he touched one peaked nipple, Elrohir gave a small moan. Elladan froze
and flicked his eyes up to Elrohir's face and noticed that his brother was
still asleep. A wicked smile spread across his Elladan's lips as he thought
that maybe Elrohir was having a pleasant dream. Elladan's fingers continued
on their path downwards and soon they found Elrohir's navel and drew lazy
circles around it, barely touching the skin. He went along to trace a very
light, almost invisible trail of small hairs, smooth as a kittens, down towards
Elrohir's elfhood. That's where the covers got in the way. When Elladan thought
about what was lying underneath that thin layer of cloth, he felt his arousal
pulsate with anticipation. He needed to see that beautiful column of flesh
that he knew his brother possessed. He had admired it from afar when they
had been bathing together several times. But he found that he couldn't wait
to see how it looked this close. Elladan slowly lifted the light cover and
drew a deep breath. Elrohir was aroused. Very much so. How could Elladan not
have noticed this through the thin covers?
He closed his eyes and swallowed hard in his suddenly very dry throat. He
boldly reached out and very lightly touched the sensitive tip of Elrohir's
proud elfhood and heard Elrohir draw a sharp breath. His brother was awake.
Elladan removed his fingers and, with a pounding heart, he dared to look up
into his brother's wide awake eyes that starred back at him. Elrohir's pupils
were dilated and his eyes were almost black with arousal and…desire?
Elladan felt Elrohir's hand on his and was guided back to Elrohir's erection,
where they settled.
"Don't stop, Elladan…don't stop" Elrohir breathed and added almost breathlessly "Your hand feels so good upon me…" Elrohir squeezed Elladan's hand around his hard shaft for emphasis and gave Elladan a look filled with need. The words shot straight to Elladan's groin and he couldn't do other than to take in the plea and began to slowly move his closed hand up and down Elrohir's pulsating arousal. A small moan escaped Elrohir's mouth and his eyes fluttered shut at the sensation of his twins strong hand moving teasingly slow around his aching shaft. Elladan speeded up a little and graced his thumb over the tiny slit at the tip of the hard length in his hand. Elrohir arched his back up from the bed at the touch and opened his mouth in a silent moan of pleasure. That was when Elladan took his opportunity to seal his lips over Elrohir's. He traced the lips under his with the tip of his tongue and slowly dipped in to the hot cavern of his brother's mouth. Elrohir's tongue snaked out to meet with his and they started to caress each others mouths. The kiss was soft and loving, yet demanding and needy at the same time. Elladan didn't break away as his nimble fingers moved down on Elrohir's shaft and started to caress and massage his tight sac. When he broke the passionate kiss and trailed soft butterfly kisses all over his brother's face, Elrohir made a small whimpering sound. Elladan quickly dipped his head down and started drawing circles around a taut nipple with his tongue. As he lapped over the sensitive bud Elrohir was moaning with the double sensation of his brother's mouth and hand working on his aroused body. Elladan sucked in the tiny bud in his mouth and Elrohir whimpered at the amazing feeling this was creating.
He arched his back again and whispered under his breath, "Elladan…please."
Elladan moved down the bed to settle on his knees next to Elrohir's feet. Elrohir answered the silent plea and spread his legs so that Elladan cold sink to his elbows in between them. He raised Elrohir's knees a little so he could hold on to his thighs for support and slowly dipped his face between his legs. Elladan started to blow air teasingly light upon Elrohir's already leaking shaft and Elrohir shifted in agony. The sensation was almost overwhelming, Elladan was touching him, yet he wasn't, and soon Elrohir was whimpering with need and begging his brother to stop the tormenting. Elladan snaked out the tip of his tongue and lightly licked up the gleaming pearl of moist at the tip of Elrohir's erection. Elrohir lifted his head to watch his brother and was met by an almost wicked smile and teasing glint in Elladan's eyes.
"By the Gods, Elladan! Let me feel your mouth, already!" he scowled. Elladan snickered.
"Impatient elfling…" And with that he dipped his head and drew the flat of his tongue from the thick base all the way to the silky tip. Elrohir drew a sharp breath as Elladan sealed his lips over the head of Elrohir's hard shaft and suckled lightly. He then widened his mouth and took in all of Elrohir in one stroke. Elrohir moaned loudly and bucked his hips upwards to get deeper into the hot, sweet mouth of his brother. Elladan had to struggle to keep Elrohir's hip movements from choking him so he opened his throat and swallowed Elrohir's shaft impossibly deep.
"Gods!" Elrohir moaned as he thrashed his head from side to side on the pillow in pleasure at the wonderful things that Elladan was doing to him. Elladan alternated long, fond licks and deep swallows and suction, so that soon, Elrohir was nothing more than a mindless mess of moans and twitches of pleasure. Elladan could feel Elrohir's release building and sucked hard two final times.
"Oh, Elladan! I'm going to…" Elrohir didn't manage more, because he came with such a force that it left him beyond words. Elladan swallowed Elrohir's essence and licked his brother's slowly softening shaft clean. Elrohir, still shaking as the waves of passion rolled inside of him, grabbed his brother's shoulders and pulled him up on top of him. He looked into his eyes and gave him a smile full of love.
"I never thought you would have the courage to seduce me." He winked at Elladan and kissed him deeply. He could taste himself in Elladan's mouth.
Elladan broke the kiss and said "Me neither. But I'm glad I did. I love you, Elrohir." He kissed him again. When they broke off to gasp for air, Elrohir smiled and answered
"I love you too, Elladan"
*****
THE END
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